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Online communication is preferable to face-to-face communication. Discuss.
1In today's world 3we find ourselves communicating more and more through online channels 5such as messaging, social media and video calls, often at the expense of face-to-face dialogue. 4There are certain situations where online communication is unavoidable 4but others where we opt for virtual over real-life conversation. 1Which begs the question: is online communication preferable in today's world?
1To begin with, I'd like to outline the advantages of online communication. 4One of the main arguments in its favour is that it opens up the possibility of communicating with people in different places around the globe. 3This has considerable benefits in the workplace as 5meetings can take place via videoconferencing between Stockholm, San Francisco and Shanghai without the need for time-consuming, exhausting, long-haul business trips. 4Furthermore, it provides opportunities for long-distance families and friends to keep in touch on a daily basis. 4Another point is that written online communication gives us the option of responding either immediately or at a time that suits us as well as allowing us to edit and polish our message.
1On the other hand, there are several significant drawbacks to over-reliance on online communication. 3Some experts are concerned that a lack of face-to-face interaction impedes the development of vital social skills 5such as empathising and reacting to situations in real time. 4Also, the very nature of conversation is different in the virtual world. If short snippets of dialogue embellished with emoticons replace longer stretches of direct conversation with emotions expressed on real faces, we're running the risk of losing the art of real conversation.
1On balance, 2I believe that online communication brings an overall advantage in today's fast-paced, global society. 4However, 2we should take care not to overlook the benefits of engaging in face-to-face dialogue.
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Do you prefer online or face-to-face communication? Why? Which type of communication do you think is more important in today’s world, and why?
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