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Have you ever had a special birthday celebration? Tell us about it!

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hermione123 29 April, 2021 - 12:04

CALLING ALL USERS! LET'S MAKE A SEQUEL!
Elsa007 came up with this idea. Users can write a sequel of a short story that previous users have written. So, you can continue the story here. And, please write the username who makes the story ;D

Boa Boa, people call him like this.
He lives in mountains, rarely comes down to the town where people gather to live.
Some say he's the guardian of the town. (Elsa007) Others say he is just a suspicious hunter.

Boa Boa lives in a small house made of wood. There aren't many rooms. Only a bathroom, and a kitchen with a dusty carpet, where he sleeps at night. He lives on his own, right beside the river in the forest.

One night, Boa Boa hears a sound. It's a weak sound almost like a whisper, but every word is clear (hermione123). A sound that says:....

Ps. If you have a better title for this comment, not the story (that capital sentence), you can change it :)

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Andrii 16 April, 2021 - 15:22

Yes, I have had special celebrations a few times. I invited my friends, and we went to a cinema. After that we had pizza for lunch. And lastly we had a lazer tag.

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Mamou1 14 August, 2020 - 11:58

Have you ever had a special birthday celebration? Tell us about it!
Hello!
yesssss for my 12 years old. Its'was the most exiting and the fantastic birthday I ever had because you know I born in 29 of February but, this day arrived each four years because February is normally 28. so 29 February was may birthday. First in the morning me and my mom went to salon to do my hair I was exited and I jump everywhere. After we went to pick the cake it's a huge one because all my classmates and other people in my school was invited ans also my family. of course. after we picked the cake we came back at home it''s was already 12 :00 I said hurry I need to dress and prepare which movie we are going to see. a horror movie or a action movie? I thought. At 1:00 PM my Friends arrived with a gift there was 10 first and then we were 20 and more . we began by eating and watch a horror movie. then at 3:00 we danced with different music it's was fantastic and we laugh a lot. after we went outside to play different game it's was enjoyable I participated a lot . there was many different meals . At 5:00 PM my Mom and My Dad came with the chocolate-strawberries cake. the cake was just amazing and delicious really the prove is we ate it all nothing left. after the cake we continue entertaining dancing talked ect..... in the end my birthday finished at 10 PM because me and my family after the birthday party at home we went to the cinema to watch a movie again really this day was the most fabulous journey in my life.

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hermione123 1 May, 2021 - 16:03

In my country, birthday isn't completely important. If you're under nine years old, you might get a party or cake or gifts. But, when you're already 10 years old or older, you may not care again about birthday. Most kids here just greets the birthday kid or sometimes give presents (but it rarely happens) . And who greets and gives the birthday kid are only the birthday kid's closest friends. I even forget my 12 birthday because we don't so care about it.

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Elife 4 February, 2020 - 23:47

Yes. Four years ago, I had a lot of jobs and I was tired in my birthday, but in the night, my classmates made a sorprise for me, it was fantastic, great and beautiful for me. I got very excited...

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lancer 23 November, 2019 - 15:11

I have grandpa and grand ma. Grandpa was dead years ago.
He's a little short but he's handsome, very kind and funny.
My grandfather's birthday comes after a few days.
So i really miss my grandpa. My grandma does too.

Today I saw my family album with my grandma. We found a photo of grandpa and grandma standing.
Even in my eyes, grandpa looks really short, but grandma is tall.
"How strange, how they had got married? Anyway he is something." I smiled at it and thought that there was a good story.

After seeing the album, we had a talk about grandpa.
At that time, I asked her to tell me about their marrige.
She said. "We always sat down to date, But it was too late when we stood up."

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hsroh 13 August, 2019 - 21:00

Attack from UFO

Hello, I’m Ben and I’m 14. I still remember what happened. This happened when I was 6 which was 2119. It was a Saturday morning. I woke up early and I was eating breakfast. As usual, I went to the market place. Suddenly, the UFO came and vanished everything apart from me. First, I thought it was just a dream, but sadly, it wasn’t! How terrible! I went home as fast as I can but UFO has already taken my house.

The next day evening, the police said that the people who survived will sent to the 2nd Earth. The planet called N-0507.

Few hours later, I was sent to the space ship. Soon the captain said “count down 3...2...1...blast up!”. It was exciting for 3 second because the UFO attacked our ship I found my mom and my friends. The captain said that he will let the people aged 20 to 24 to help people in UFO to come to our ship. But as I know, it is dangerous. It was a moment that I had to choose between my family and my life. I chose my family. Later I finally went to the UFO and... BOOM!

Me and other people were falling down from the UFO. The hopitel space ship resqued us and luckily I was still alive.

THE END.

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kleona8210 9 June, 2019 - 10:54

I am in 9th grade so with my classmates I decided to take a trip to the
village of Lumas and visit Sineci. The school permitted us to stay for 1
month there. We all were very happy and excited about this trip. On a
sunny day, we arrived in the village by bus. I knew very well this village
because my grandparent lives there, so we decided to go to my
grandparents to know more about Sineci. My grandparents live in a
beautiful house surrounded by forest. When we went to their house my
grandparents told us for the beautiful place where Sineci is located and for
the local residents, that was built there. Rexhina, Stela, and Ledian asked
them for the cave of Sineci. Grandparents told them that the cave is on a
high mountain. Also, they told my friends about the lost city of Katunda and
the source of the dragon. At this moment I made a promise to myself that I
will discover the mystery about this place. We left for Sineci. The road was
very difficult. To go there, we must pass some small streams. While
walking amidst the woods we were hearing melodious chirruping of several
birds. When we had arrived we saw the wonderful locality out
there. Sineci was a magical place. It consisted of two large ponds. The
SKY WAS REFLECTED FROM THE POND water and as a result, the
ponds were blue like the sky.  The people there told us that the ponds are
too deep and many people had died there. We stopped at the locality and
ate something. I and my friend Genta, after we end the lunch decided to
climb the cliff to see the forest. When we climbed to the top, we saw the
source of Sinec. The source of Sinec was coming out of a giant old rock.

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Alice_Raccoon 9 May, 2019 - 06:48

It was Dasha`s 15th birthday. She didn’t expect us, but her mother was in business. She helped us organize this day. Dasha did not guess anything.

First, her mother sent Dasha to the store. At the same time, we were preparing her room for her arrival. There were a lot of balls and gifts. For 15 minutes we managed to arrange everything just fine.

Moreover, we were sure that everything would go as it should. But, our plan was failed.

While we were preparing her room, she saw us through the window. Surprise was failed. But she was impressed by our preparations.

So far, she remembers this birthday as the most positive and enjoyable. Her mother told us: “Next time close the curtains, otherwise there will be no surprise”. It will remain in her heart forever.

Thanks to polinafris, my friend)

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Yushra 28 January, 2019 - 16:01

It was 22nd January 2017. My 12th Birthday. And it was our School Picnic too! So I thought it'll be double fun celebrating my birthday at beach.(Our picnic spot was at a beach). But I found that everyone has forgotten about my birthday. I was so sad. And I noticed that everyone was hiding something from me. That made me more sad. (After a few hours later) I was sitting on a chair front of the ocean. Suddenly my friends jumped on me saying Happy Birthday!!!!! I was so happy. And the best part was while cutting the cake they pushed my face on the cake and I was like a Cake Monster!!
IT WAS MY BEST BIRTHDAY CELEBRATION EVER!!

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luchi 26 April, 2018 - 15:49

well
in my last birthday my classmates made a sorprise for me
it was fantastic, I was going to cry

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Batgirl 25 April, 2018 - 17:49

Yes, I had. I celebrated my last birthday in the quest room. I invited three of my best friends and we had a great time together.

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Tennia 25 April, 2018 - 17:07

I only celebrated my birthday one time because my family don't have time but I prefer that. I prefer be with my mother than a party. She is special for me.

Note: I don't have moneey and time.

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IamYegane 12 December, 2017 - 15:32

When i was 9 years old ( I think ) I celebrated my birthday and my friends went to our home. It was great ! but right now i don't like celebrate my birthday I don't know why !

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hellokity 5 September, 2017 - 10:34

The most remembered of my birthday is 20th. It was the fist time i had a birthday cake. It was chocolate cake. My best friend was make it for me, and i was so happy. But at that time i hadn't any dish, frog and knife. we eat by hand, so it was fun. my face, my hand just like a clown.

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Jonathan - Coor... 6 September, 2017 - 04:30

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MyStudyCoachJonas 21 August, 2017 - 23:39

In my 12th birthday my parents put an inflatable swimming pool and I invited all my friends to my house and then they made a table of sweets at the end.
After swimming we went to eat pasta and salad.
We also watched the movie of MR.Bean holiday.

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ariina 6 June, 2017 - 05:19

honestly I had never been surprised for my birthdays...but for my17th birthday in this month my family invited me to restaurant for dinner...^_^

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SLMT 2 June, 2017 - 16:54

My special birthday celebration was when I was 17. My parents made a party for me and invited my relatives anf friends without telling me anything about it.On previously birthdays, my family and I go out to eat at restaurant and bought presents for me. So I also thought that my 17th birthday would be like my previous simple birthday.But they made a secret party for me. My parents and sister told me to come home early after school.So I came back early that day without noticing anything.My house is normal just like normal days.The lamps in front of my house is on and the whole house is black.There's no light in my house.I was doubt a little bit bcoz of no light. I went in my home. As soon as I was in my home I heard "Suprise,Happy Birthday".All of My family and friends were there. My mom brought a birthday cake which was made by herself.I couldn't forget that moment.I was so happy and was almost cry.My parents also gave a permision to take care of the street cat I told them last month .That gift was my beat birthday gift I have ever had.I would not never forget that day. It will remain in my heart forever.

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JoEditor 3 June, 2017 - 18:10

That sounds great! What a lovely surprise! 
Best wishes, Jo (LearnEnglish Teens Team) 

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mikiihwang 24 May, 2017 - 10:56

Yes, I used to have a special birthday celebration last year. It was my birthday and it was Sunday. I woke up and waited my mother asked me: ''What do you want to do on your birthday?'' because she always asked me that question when my birthday was coming. But she was quiet. Every members in family are quiet, too. They acted like they didn't realized anyhthing. That made me thought that they didn't remember my birthday. I felt so angry, lonely, miserable like the character in the above story. Because of being angry, I didn't go downstairs to the kitchen and had lunch in the midday. I kept me alone in my room. After that, in the early evening, I had to go to the church. I went out. Then I went home. While I was going to my room, I met my aunt. ''Hello honey'', she said. And I just put my angry face to see her without saying hello back. When I walked to my room, the light was off so the room was dark. I turned the light on. Suddenly, my two younger sisters shouted loudly, ''Happy birthday, sis'' with a happy smile in their face and a birthday cake in their hands. I felt so surprised. That surprise made me speechless, I didn't know what to say for the special birthday celebration they gave me. I just said, ''Thank you'' but I felt extremely happy in my heart. Then I wished all the best for my new age, blowed the candles. After that, I ate birthday cake with sisters. It tasted so delicious, like the most delicious birthday cake ever in my life. In conclusion, it was the most memorable birthday party to me. Until now, I can also feel the surprised feeling when the light was on. I will never forget this birthday party.

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BRPMontenegro 17 April, 2017 - 22:39

The last year I had a very special birthday because I think that I was lonely in my birthday because I was in Guayaquil and my family were in Quito. But this day they come to Guayaquil only for me. And this day was very special for me.

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Sorry420 28 March, 2017 - 08:41

Yes, I had a wonderful and memorable birthday last year.
I Invited all my friends and family members in my birthday party. My parents books a Chinese restaurant for my party.
All the people brought for me lots of gifts and wishes card.
On of the biggest surprise my parents given me a cute little Rabbit pet.
I never forgot that day always memorable my life.

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rodrigar 4 January, 2017 - 22:32

My favorite birthday was in 1999. My friend and I celebrated our birthdays together, in Tres Cantos(Madrid). We spent 1 hour playing soccer and then we went to McDonald´s for 2 hours, then we went to my house to play hide and seek. I liked my birthday because all my friends gave me many presents, like soccer balls and footballs, shirts, trousers and most importantly, that we spent time together.

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